i don’t understand the connection between the sweet bourbon and your desires to write about something meaningful. I think it would be stronger without the bourbon/lips… just my 2cents.
This one is my favorite of your recent ones. Do you mean shutter like open and close, as in shutters on windows? Or shudder– tremble? The first time I read it I didn’t question shutter as a verb, but when you used it on your blog it made me think tremble.
April 20th, 2007 at 3:35 pm
i don’t understand the connection between the sweet bourbon and your desires to write about something meaningful. I think it would be stronger without the bourbon/lips… just my 2cents.
April 20th, 2007 at 9:52 pm
I love it, it’s all beautiful and real. And the art is beautiful, good job!
April 28th, 2007 at 12:34 am
This one is my favorite of your recent ones. Do you mean shutter like open and close, as in shutters on windows? Or shudder– tremble? The first time I read it I didn’t question shutter as a verb, but when you used it on your blog it made me think tremble.
May 1st, 2007 at 9:39 am
tremble.